my 1st time ever ^^

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my first time ever composing poem..of course with help from fithri and rahmat ^^


wahaha..i'm really happy today coz mdm leena give us back our asgment along with the marks. i got 12 1/2 a.k.a 12.5 from 15 marks..whoaa..but it's not the most important thing.the most importand thing is her comment on all my poems..lets take a look ^^


her comment on this poem : sounds like pantun!! cute!!



on this poem : nice arrangement of words,very straightforward and easy to understand



this one : a lot of whispers being displayed in this poem.good effort,nice,
a lot of hope


"simple yet meaningful "



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thanks a lot to those who helped me!!



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